This is a rough draft of some...

[DBullis]

This is just a rough draft or some random animations and i just want to know of the guy shooting's proportions look right i probaly miss spelt something so sry. Thanks.

http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a298/UnadoptedJesus/animationtest.swf

[DBullis]

I am probaly just gonna keep it rough but i might not anyway tell me what you guys think.

http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a298/UnadoptedJesus/phantomroughtest.swf

[jakiloblanco]

Looks cool! i think the one thing that gets me is the 3rd cut. i think buddy should hold that pose a tiny bit longer, so that the audience can read it.

Fun stuff!

[NOOB!]

looking cool,but in the first one,as he lifts his arms,they look long,then when they go to shoot ,they look shorter.

fix it! fix it! fix it!

[DBullis]

Thanks guys i appreciat the help. And i will get to fixing that. Oh and the 3rd cut it was ment to take awhile longer but i had to play a clan match and i will also fix that.

[Terro]

I agree with Noob and Jaki,, but at the same time I like the roughness of the animation a lot. It kind of gives the effect of someone holding a jittering camera. If you seen Kill Bill , that animation kind of had the same effect going. Keep us updated on your progress.