Flat Cheese preview

[Ashley davison]

http://media.revver.com/broadcast/25803/thumbs/thumb_default.jpg
http://revver.com/video/25803/10963
Take a look, see what you think?
Enjoy!

[robber3000]

OMG! what have you been doing..? i swear that could be an animated series for kids :D

[NOOB!]

sound qaulity of the voices was meh!

but it was great,reminded me of a lighter version of ren and stimpy for some reason hehe.

[robber3000]

now i know what it reminds me of, spongebob squarepants :D

[Ashley davison]

cool, thanks for the comments! Any suggestions on better voice recording? Any ips?

[jackhalfaprayer]

haha that's pretty great! reminded me very much of spongebob and patrick in a good way. great gags, solid animation.

Voice performances didn't leave me wanting, but the quality was kinda low. If you can't afford studio time (heh,) rent or buy a mic (you can get one at a music shop for less than a hundred) and find an older DV camera with a mic hookup. record to tape and capture from the camera.

The other option is to find an olde mixer, but I dunno. Someone else might know some stuff.

[robber3000]

duh........ man, you guys would really hate the quality of my microphone :rolleyes:

[vicjperry]

I liked it too. My little girl calls a slice of cheese, "flat cheese".:D

[KOTK]

Ahh, yes. I remember this chracter. Nice to see you got around to making a cartoon with him.

I agree with the audio. Sorry got no tips. :o

Good stuff.:cool:

[daved]

great work Ashley, love your style! fun characters :)

[elephant]

Too Spongebob. :Xead:

Wonderful animation and idea. IMHO, the character designs (apart from Flat Cheese) are great. I want moooorreeee.... :cool:

[vicjperry]

I think it just needs a little tweaking but nothing serious. I agree about the audio though, but all in all, it's a great animation and could be developed into a series. You have what it takes Ashley.:D :D :D

Invest in a good microphone and a program (free) like Audacity will help too. You'll be on the BBC in no time.;) :)

[Ashley davison]

I liked it too. My little girl calls a slice of cheese, "flat cheese".
Hehe...thats uhmazing! When I was little I used to call cheese slices; flat cheese. I just thought everyone did back then haha. Thanks for the comments people! MORE TO COME!!!

[Simon Smith]

OOoo.. nice style there m'friend!

[Ranoka]

Wow, I really liked that, great style and animation :D could easily be developed into an ongoing series if you wanted.

Surely the man deserves some silver tokens for this!

Sound tips, get a decent condencer microphone and a soundcard with phantom power on here's what I use atm:
http://www.dolphinmusic.co.uk/page/shop/flypage/product_id/2998
http://www.dolphinmusic.co.uk/page/shop/flypage/product_id/4001

You'll also want to get a mic stand and pop guard, XLR cable to plug the mic in and stuffs like that.

[August]

I'm sorry I'm late.
And I mean really sorry. maybe really really.. but enough of that.
It was truly brilliant. I especially liked the splashing party scene. a bit scary. (that always works on me)
I hope to see more of your work soon. don't you have a homepage with nice drawings on it or something? :)

[Ashley davison]

SOOOOOON! ;)

[Ima Gooner]

the beginning looks when dib and zim are chasing each other. Its 4:49 if any of yous guys wanna wait for it to buffer...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P5ocLTLntxE

[callumations]

that was excellent, i thought the voices themselves were good but yeah the sound was a little muffled in parts. something i need to work on myself also.

i loved the style, especially the backdrops, like the clouds at the start and the backdrop for the splash party. did you paint and scan those in ?

where is there more ??