A bear and a profile

[Clay]

Yo!... anyone remeber me from adam phillip's forums? Im an old school member (well perhaps a middle school memeber). Anyway tell me what you think of my bear:

http://www.morseldisruption.com/bearwalk.html

and my profile for my tafe's website:

http://www.morseldisruption.com/claypro.html

The profiles is for the tafe (sorta like collage) that Im at studing animation. Fun fact: the guy who teaches me was supervised at disney by mr Adam Phillips himself

[NOOB!]

bear walk is nice,but i would add sum secondary action,seems a bit stiff,maybe his belly movin up n down?

welcome btw.

[Clay]

yeah... hes actually just gonna walk off the screen from about the middle. Its quite exciting that I actually got something done for my project due in 7. (has to be 30sec showreal)

[Terro]

Hey Clay, your bear is a great star. There is a lot of little tweaks you can do to give it a more realistic cartoonish feel. I think you can accent his height grow with each step a little more. Also you can add some shoulder movement so he doesn't look as stiff when he's walking.

I also checked out your site and I se your into Claymation, I was always wondering how hard the process is of claymation.

[Clay]

thanks for the tips.

Its full animation also... all the same pensil drawing on the same layer

Claymation isn't as hard as it looks and also its harder than it looks.

You just move the clay take a pic... move the clay take a pic. But theres no edit undo and theres no way of changing what you have done. Bit of trial and error... and error... and error. Nah it aint that bad, it just gets frustraiting sometimes. But its fun!

edit:

well I did added a bit more... just the ease in. He will have eyes and arms... Im doing the arms seprate so I can change them easy if I need to.