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elephant
08-23-2006, 06:31 PM
so I'm sort of developing a graphic novel about this messed up artist who lives with a magpie. stuff will happen, thoughts will be pondered about.
I'll be taking it slowly and hopefully in all sorts of directions. black and white only won't do it for me.

http://hot.ee/sininelevant/bastard.JPG

thoughts?

elephant
08-24-2006, 07:17 PM
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y28/elehpant/a5ddb341.png
or http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y28/elehpant/bb4bd92e.png

Terro
08-24-2006, 08:19 PM
Dark and disturbing. Reminds me of Sandman a little. It's to early for me to really be able to crit on this, but I like the direction this is going in. This looks like it's going to be a dark emotional trip and I love dark tales.

Are you doing this strictly for the wb or do you plan on getting it published?

elephant
08-24-2006, 08:40 PM
Right now I'm just doing it for the sake of creative stretching. Also, the image quality is quite bad... mostly because it's story driven (beware, talking heads syndrome!).

The next page looks hideous, I'll try to redo it.

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y28/elehpant/4d500c49.png

elephant
08-24-2006, 11:11 PM
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y28/elehpant/child-1.png

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y28/elehpant/forgive-1.png