New Toon! Guitar Hero Broke My Knee

[flashcartoons]

http://newgrounds.com/portal/view/335517

please review and vote 5! looks like no awards for me :( maybe some day ill win some again

[Terro]

I watched it twice and have 2 different reviews. The first time I watched this toon was at work where I have no PC speakers. I was forced to watch it with no volume and enjoyed it very much. There could be more frames in the animation but over all the story came out pretty sharp. A few scenes made me laugh like the one where he's "about to ROCK!!"

Then when I got home I watched it with the volume on and somethign was missing. The voice overs and counds just didn't seem to connect with the story. But thats just my opinion.

Overall I was pretty impressed. You seem to pop these animations out fairly quick and you have a nice way of storytelling and thats what it's all about. 1 Silver Talent has been Awarded.

[flashcartoons]

YAY SOMEONE POSTED IN MY TOPIC!

thanks terro, well im am limited to voice actors, that was mostly me sadly

also ive tried to get people to voice act for me, but usually i cant reach them when i really need them

and i know im poping these out fast, its my 3rd cartoon this month! i havent made that many cartoons in 1 month since 2001 when i started flash :cool:

[winadollar]

http://newgrounds.com/portal/view/335517

please review and vote 5! looks like no awards for me :( maybe some day ill win some again

Haha Man! That was sweet good work

[flashcartoons]

hey man im glad i got you to join up :blink:

ur forum name probably shouldnt have your email in it :D

[KOTK]

Whoa! You really pumped this one out fast as hell, yo.

Is ai'ight.

I'll like to see your next one have more animation though and maybe work a bit more longer on it?...

Good job. Again.:cool:

[flashcartoons]

well this cartoon had more animation then my last 2 cartoons, so i am getting better at frame by frame :)

[Terro]

No doubt your getting better. I see a major improvement over the Britney spears short you did. The face animations/art have improved a lot. The cool thing is that your kind of building up your own style. Keep at it.

[NOOB!]

what the hell??

lol!

[flashcartoons]

yes my own style is what i want to accomplish! :D

[elephant]

I'm sorry, but this wasn't entertaining at all in my opinion.
I didn't even crack a smile... Guess that's documentaries for me, huh? :rolleyes:

[flashcartoons]

:( understood, i am getting better

i will make you laugh MARK MY WORDS! :D

[elephant]

:( understood, i am getting better
Yeah, the animation's okay. The most vital part needs work though - stories! Stories-stories! :p

[flashcartoons]

kinda took this story from someones unfortunate event

breaking his knee playing guitar hero :P

[vlasvlasvlas]

great timing for comedy genre!!!! congratsssss

story is good!

:)!!!!
vladimir.