Monsieur Rat - Transformation

[Monsieur Rat]

It was thisor calculus homeowork, and this won out. I have a fairly strong idea and plan of just what is going to happen, so here I am, presenting the very beginning to you. I'm taking this from a full fledged toon aproach, because I like to have ideas just tossed in. It is sort of a fable-inspired piece (not the game, like a story with a moral).

Enjoy, and please tear it apart and tell me what to fix.


Direct Link - http://img152.imageshack.us/my.php?image=transformationcontestxm4.swf

[NOOB!]

YOU CANNOT USE FLASH TAGS WITH ANYTHING FROM IMAGESHACK

i'm not sure what happening,so i can't give u any decent feedback,whats the idea u got?

[Monsieur Rat]

oops, well i fixed the tags then... basically this man has killed a boar and he carts it off and is trailed by an imp and he is eating the imp from a tree above drops the apple, and he's like, why the eff not and eat it, but its transformed to a pig himself then gets arrowed...

[elephant]

Ooo, the story is great and so are fables in general, but I'm not following the happenings in your little animation. Maybe do a storyboard first?

And congrats for joining the competition, good luck! ;)

[Monsieur Rat]

I can understand the confusion, and I do have storyboard... on paper, i think it'll make much more sense once it's been cleaned up and the like... It starts with a grunt a sword sound then s pig squeal and a slice then it fades from the black screen the was display the intro creds during those sounds to show a leather-booted foot step and an a sword come to the side with blood dripping off, the it cuts to the top of the character and he turns and looks at the dead pig, which spazzes and squirts blood just for effect, he walks over and picks it up then starts off. then from behind a tree comes a tiny imp aappears and hops after them. then it fades and fades to a camp sight, and it's now night time, the pig is on a spit and being roasted and the man is sitting on a log, it pans up and in shows a tree with some movement, then it cuts to into the foliage and the imp conjureds up the apple and nods, then drops it down onto the man, as it bounces off his ehad he yoinks it from the air and looks at it. he then nods as well and takes a bite... suddenly he starts to melt sort of and then stretch, his skin curls and peels auntil he looks like compost, and it sits there with nothing happening... then the imp hops out fo the tree flicks point at it, and hops away, then the mush starts to rumble and light streams out, it cuts to above the canopy and light burts up it cuts back and the mush is shaping into a pig. it solidifies and the pig snorts and looks around... sudenly a hunter with a bow pops up from the bushes and the pigs eyes go wide... and it ends

[Terro]

Good to see you join the contest MR. From reading your description it looks loike your got your work set foy yourself. Best of luck to you.

[karakul]

mistical spookyness:Xead:
all in black-red:eek: