Unagents 10

[SacreJacques]

I finished my Animation Unagents 10. It is my 10th unagents animation, but seeing the 1st 9 is not at all required to understand this one.
I used Anime Studio and Mirage Studio to make it.

http://youtube.com/watch?v=scXTBnKP1CE
or
http://www.zebradillo.com/Animations/UAE10.wmv

[kttn]

You got potential.

The thing I really liked were the synchronisation. The voices didn't fit every character that was in there, but nearly all of your synchronspeakers (that means you both XD !) tried to express the different moods of the characters - a sign of an actor. You did well.

Next thing: the editing was good also. You can recognize some film vocabulary, like different perspectives and stuff.
I got an overall view of what you tried to say.

The animation was crap. No..not at all. You just don't cared about those frame by frame animaton principles, but thats okay. Even if the animation was limited only on draging and droping, your "ugly" characters - sorry - have an acting in it. That means that they behave like people, even if they do not look like it.

The story: well, i might be too artsy, but has this story any meaning ? ^^
It's a nice Saturday morning cartoon story.

Illustration bla: color - don't like it. character design - is okay, but could be better, when your illustration skills might be better. composition - what composition ?

conclusion:
+ sfx
| story
+ editing
| animation
- illustration bla

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Keep it up! =)