Incial concept_ character

[Ferx]

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[BrioCyrain]

Nice, but LOL, why is there a line going across his crotch area(or is that a girl)?

[Monsieur Rat]

yah, lol, he's built like a dude, but his crotch definately doesnt look all that male.

[Ferx]

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[BrioCyrain]

Lol, very nice.

[Ferx]

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[Roland]

Nice work :)

One thing is the animation in that walk. I would typically say that a woman will walk more elegantly than that but the walk defines the character just like the clothes do, which says she's not a woman of elegance but more like a girl.
However, there's a part that really does look a bit funny and that's the blatent snap in the loop when her right arm goes to pivot to the rear. Smoothen it out a bit, and it's television worthy!

Unless it's dead boring and not funny at all, then really good luck to you.