Animation Tests 1

[Bussman]

Here are two tests ive done, they arent the greatest, but I just wanna pump out regular stuff to keep me going and stuff . . .

Splash 1 (http://photobucket.com/albums/v700/tashomepage/?action=view&current=splashpractice1.swf)

Bag - (Not too good) (http://photobucket.com/albums/v700/tashomepage/?action=view&current=bagpractice1.swf)

any crits, or anything?

[NOOB!]

the splash looks nice,but i don't like at the end when all the water pulls back in,looks kinda like a magnet pulling in liquid metal.

i like the flour sacks one,very nice weight.

overall good job,u need to work on exaggeration and smooth flow,thats my only crit for ya.

[-nelson-]

ah yes. i saw this. with the water, it seems only 2 major exess water is coming off: the left and right. and the arc they flow in is like noob said, magnetic it goes up, maybe a little outward, then it drops down. but definitly pretty good first try. ur flour sacks seem to stop and go stop and go. need to keep an overall avg flow. and ur consistency is alil unbalanced, but goin the way ur goin is a great start. watch this (http://newgrounds.com/portal/view/195673) its an amazing reference (not for color tho) it covers both of ur tests, enjoy