Viridarium: Mudslides

[Tordeck]

Hey, I’ve spent the better part of 10 months working on this cartoon, I know it seems long for such a short time, but some parts where done traditionally at school for my art class. As well as the character sheets. One main thing to keep in mind is this is meant to be short and sweet,.
It was originally meant to just be a short cartoon dedicated to my friend who passed away from cancer last year. He always told me to Keep trying... So Luke this is for you.

Run Time: about 50 seconds
Episode Title: Viridarium Mudslides
Episode description:
One day yikkles decided to go sliding on his leaf down the mudslides of Viridarium.

For more about yikkles and viridarium please visit www.TimBurns.cjb.net

The cartoon (you'll need flash player 8 to view it) (http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/272982)

[MiG]

Viewed, commented and voted on.
Really great stuff Tim.
Congrats!

[-nelson-]

i remeber way back the rough u showed on brackenwood :D alright this is cool, yea i agree with the reviewer who sed u copied adams style, not in a bad way of course. its not like he copyrighted forests in animation :p. good work, i especially liked the squirrel animation

[NOOB!]

nice,keep working on that animation though,i couldn't help but feel it was choppy.

Adam Phillips character animation is choppy too and i hate that!!! so maybe u where inspired.

[KOTK]

You noticed Adams animation is abit choppy too aye Nubian.

Short and sweet. I liked your backgrounds in this Tim.

Sorry to hear about your mate, is'nt it a bastard when you lose someone you love.

[NOOB!]

You noticed Adams animation is abit choppy too aye Nubian.



a bit is an understatement,i think he mentioned he does it intentionally,but that doesn't make it look any better in my eyes.this is something i wouldn't tell him on his forum because of all the fan boys and girls that would attack me for it,so hopefully he'll stumble across my comment here one day.Maybe he's improved since then i dunno,it has been a year after all.

So Tordeck,don't be too inspired is basically all i want to say.

[elephant]

Dunno, I wouldn't really say that Phillips does it that bad.

Nice work, Tim. I think it was pretty was cool, but the directing needs some improvement.
Anyway, keep up the good work and hopefully we'll see another movie soon! :)

[NOOB!]

Dunno, I wouldn't really say that Phillips' does it that bad.



ofcourse you wouldn't.

[KiWi]

To me it looked like the squirrel was really heavy. Oh yea, great movie, liked the camera angles.

[Tordeck]

Really, I never Adams stuff being choppy. I'll keep in mind to make it smother. THanks for the crits everyone.