The Play Dogs Animation Pitch

[Milesx]

Hello I'm new, and I wanted to show off an animation pitch, which I am planning to write for a cartoon studio. The series is about three half human half dog bounty hunters, who catch wanted criminals in a future when humans and hybrid human animals coexist. Since bounty hunter characters are not very common in cartoon shows today, I thought this type of series would be interesting to kids. It has five story lines and it is a mix genre of science fiction, action, comedy, and adventure. The series will be aim to kids ten and up. Here's a link to my animation pitch so you can learn about it. What do you think?

http://www.writingforums.org/showthread.php?p=122818#post122818

:rotfl

[Zatara]

I like the concept about the future of human and animal hybrids, "Paras."
Overall the idea could use some tweaking, but you have a good idea.

My opinion: just the way I see it in my head, you may be able to darken things up a little (not super dark, but like Gargoyles) and stay away from little kiddie names like "Play Dogs," not saying its bad, but I don't think 10+ dig little kiddie sounding names.

[Milesx]

I thought of something better for my Play Dogs. I'll post the summary after I complete it.