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Sangfroid
11-30-2005, 05:08 PM
Havn't sat down and just drawn somthing in ages. So that's exactly what i just did XD.
NOOB!
12-01-2005, 03:28 AM
hey dude,nice image,i believe this pic can be much stronger though,it shows no sense of weight and dynamics.I'm guessin your character is meant to be kinda dull,but that doesn't mean the overall image has to be,u can still create dynamics on a character like this.
its only takes a few lines to create form.Keep in mind your line Rhythm.
I'm not sure whether u wanted him to appear to be floating or just leaving the ground,but thats not the impression i got,i got the impression your having trouble with perspective planes.
but anywho,heres a quick 2 min paintover to show u what i mean bout dynamics.
http://www.animationforum.net/users/noob/images/crit2.jpg
great job overall :D keep postin! great colours!
Sangfroid
12-01-2005, 04:15 AM
cool, thanks noob :D. I always seem to have trouble placing the feet, dunno why i havn't coreected it yet. so much to learn so little time ;_;
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