Ninja Challenge

[Howie]

Unfortunately I’m too late for the challenge, but I would still like some constructive criticism.

http://img362.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ninja46hm.swf

thanks

[KOTK]

Ooooo... nice anim man. As for a CC, maybe put more impact on the hit by bring his arms back. Something is not right about the fall, I think it's theway he falls.

Other than that, bloody good anim man. :cool:

[munch]

constructive ay?
ok...

buddiful!! :D

[NOOB!]

tut tut,late eh? hehe

that was excellent,i agree it needs a stronger impact,but apart from that its damn impressive!

[elephant]

It looks great!

Shouldn't the weight of the ninja make the fat bloke lean back first? And then, when the ninja jumps away, his victim falls on his nose. That should add 'impact'.

[NOOB!]

If you don't enter the exploding santa challenge,u better enter the one after :mad: :p

p.s. everyone is free to go to the challenge feedback forum and post ideas for future challenges.

[Howie]

Thanks for the comments everyone.
I completely agree about the way he falls.
And I'll be sure to enter the exploding santa challenge on time.

[Lion_O]

Hahahh Hey Howie/InterCow, i think it was ur links that brought me here to the af forums from awn. I had forgotten how i ended up finding these forums. Well i pertty much said the same thing on the awn, but i agree with what everyone said here.

Exploding Santa??? Where? :blink:

[Howie]

http://img443.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ninja42tn.swf

Seems a little fast but I think it looks better.

[Lion_O]

Shhhiiiiiaaaaaa. Now if u can a make the big guys bodys bend more or the head come back some to really feel the impact of the hit and the bounciness of the body on the floor u have it. Looks good now tho, awsome howie.

[Howie]

http://img341.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ninja43hs.swf

gave the head more force like you said. :D

thanks for the help, I really appreciate it.

[Lion_O]

Sorry Howie i meant the head moving further back on the impact not the fall down. Switch them and i think u'll have better results.

[Howie]

http://img402.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ninja44bl.swf

[elephant]

Here's what I had in mind -

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y28/elehpant/awsdfgu.png

[Lion_O]

Hahahhah yeah that's along the same lines as i was thinking. But i must admit the face expressions do sell it more. :Xead:

[Howie]

I was getting frustrated with the last one so I gave it another try.

http://img517.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ninja56rn.swf

[KOTK]

:D That's awesome man.

[ABigSmall]

That's good. Me like. :)

[Lion_O]

awsome Howie. Looks good to me.

[-nelson-]

whoa howie, nice! although i think when the dude falls, instead of having his feet fall(delayed) in unison, have the left one fall after the right one...ithink, great job overall tho