Neo - MOTION

[Neo_Crisis]

I'm entering.:D I really really want that book!!!!!!:Blahblahb Here's my try at the ball (it really really sucks):( :( *sighs* Theflag is coming up soon.;)
http://media.putfile.com/Ball10

[Terro]

It's great to have you enter the challenge Neo, and traditionally too. I think your way to hard on yourself because that bouncing ball is not bad at all. Plus remember, you have a entire month to revise and add and make it better. :)

[vicjperry]

Wow, a whole month! Man this challenge is harder than I thought. I'm done but will wait for later to post it. I want to see what the competition has to offer first.:rolleyes: :blink:

I'd love to have that book so I may do a bouncing ball with naked ladies dancing and stripping around it. That should win, and they might even notice a bouncing ball in there.:D :D I'm an amateur remember. I gotta have a few aces up my sleeve.:eek: :cool:

Nice bouncing Neo. That ball seems alive!

[Walker]

your ball floats, concentrate on your timing and spacing. I like the squash and stretch you have going, you kept the volume

[Neo_Crisis]

Thanks Terro and Vic.

your ball floats, concentrate on your timing and spacing. I like the squash and stretch you have going, you kept the volume
I like squash and stretch.:D I'm going redo it to work on my timing and spacing.:)


Ok here my flag. The wind is blowing hard and the pole is shaking cause of the wind is blowing it. I decided not to draw my avatar on the flag.:Xead: I really enjoyed doing the flag. I guess the animation is..... ok......:blink:

http://media.putfile.com/Flag-57

[Walker]

not a very lively flag, looks like someone is tugging it with a string attached to it. take a look at vic's or nelsons flag for a good example. keep practicing

[NOOB!]

although i agree with walker,i know doing this tradish makes it 20% more difficult keep at it.

i know this challenge will be difficult to judge.

[jackhalfaprayer]

yah props for pencil+paper.

Ball: I think when Walker says ppl's balls are floating (don't touch that one, vic:) ) he's actually trying to say the arcs and timing are too uniform. the ball should lose speed and energy as it bounces. As it stands many of these are staying in the air too long on the downward side of the apex -esp. in the last few bounces. Unless the balls are super bouncy or something.

Flag: The ribbons at the top of the flag are too quick, but it's lookin good. Don't be afraid to whip the contour of the flag around.

Keep up the good work, Neo:D

[Terro]

Although your flag may not show the entire cycle of a flag in the wind, it shows it's extremes and still nooks natural. Could definitely be improved with some shadows to enhance the effect.