View Full Version : commando. yes, another commando
dunbar10
04-13-2006, 02:12 PM
yes, it is another military type thing, sorry. I'll try and switch it up for my next peice.
the composition sucks, mainly because I never intended on finishing this.
but I did.
ah well.
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/3614/commando6ky.jpg
NOOB!
04-14-2006, 09:42 AM
looks great,colouring has improved too:D right arm looks broken at the shoulder.
Terro
04-14-2006, 09:51 AM
No need to switch from military type art, your awsome at it. Soldier looks great the only thing I think that can be fixed is the horizon line and the mountains. The cutoff line is to straight. The mountain range come into the water a little in a few places.
Great stuff.
dunbar10
04-14-2006, 03:09 PM
thanks guys.
NOOB: yeah, his shoulder is a little disjointed and elongated. (old football injury? :p )
Terro: yeah, the entire background and water and stuff is all messed up. I basically just came up with it at the last second, this was just going to be wacom practice, so I didn't really plan any of that stuff out, and I'm afraid it shows.
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