TFC
08-16-2005, 01:00 AM
I wrote this script at the beginning of summer. I haven't gotten a chance to work on it until now. This is my first animtion with an actual story, however little there may be here....
I dunno about the proper way to write a script so I sort of guessed.
A Big Blue Sky Episode 1
And thus went the great legend of times long forgotten.
Under a big blue sky, on top of a small blue hill inexplicably existing in the middle of a big big perfectly flat green field only not exactly the middle, just a little bit to the left, there sat Esoprup the hamster. Esoprup had spent the past seven million years smacking the ground with his face in order to carve a picture of a lizard into the face of the hill. It had been very hard work. The hill was rather hard. But at last, the job was done and Esoprup could finally relax.
He looked up at the sky. The sky seemed to smile a congratulatory smile at him. Esoprup smiled back. A truck fell out of the sky, landed on Esoprup and the hill, and exploded.
It wasn't a very good legend. Dalton certainly didn't think so.
<play cancion de mariachi for 1:00>
<shots of Dalton at school>
Dalton gets home <music fades>
Dalton slumps down in chair looking dazed. He stays there for ten seconds.
[TEN HOURS LATER]
Same shot but now it's 1:00 in the morning. Dalton jerks his head into alertness. Looks around confused a little. Reaches into backpack and pulls out a book. Opens it and places it on desk. Looks at it. Pause. Head clonks on book. Dalton is fast asleep.
[THE NEXT DAY]
[CLASS]
Dalton is sitting with his head on his desk.
Teacher: So according to the text, Dalton, what is the meaning OF (huge emphasis on this word) the legend of Esoprup?
Dalton doesn't react.
Teacher: Dalton? Dalton!
Dalton: Hemmemmgweghguhblegh.
Teacher: WRONG!
Teacher takes of his shoe. Shoe turns into gun.
Teacher: I SHALL NOW ADMINISTER YOUR PUNISHMENT!
Dalton looks up actually awake and frightened.
Before the teacher can shoot Dalton, a giant metal shark crashes through the windows and pins the teacher against the wall.
Teacher looks up. Eyes widen.
Teacher: Oh no. It can't be!
A pirate is standing on the shark. He looks around and then leaps into the air. He lands on Dalton's desk and it falls over.
The pirate squats down and stares at Dalton.
Jules stands up on the other side of the room.
Jules: Dalton? Are you okay? HEY IS THAT A PIRATE?!
Dalton: I...I dunnoobblbgghhhchhk.
Pirate: SWAALALALALALALALALA! MURRAY! It's him! Prepare the butter!
Voice outside: I am wearing a hat! HAHAHA! GET IT?!? A HAT?!?! AHAHAHAHAHA!
Pirate: THE BUTTER MURRAY! THE BUTTURRRRRRRRR!!!!
Voice outside: Oh yeah. *snort*
The shark's eyes glow and pipe comes out of its side. Butter shoots out and covers Dalton.
Dalton blinks.
Pirate: YERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR comminwithmeletsgo.
Dalton: Eh herm gwuh eh what?
Teacher: Hey! Hey wait! That's...uh...that's...uh no! What are you doing?!
Pirate: Doing?! DOING?! What are YOU doing?!?!
Dalton: Uh....buhhh....yeh?
Pirate turns around and leans his face in close to Dalton's.
Pirate: YERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR........ .......................COMMINWITHMELETSGOOKAYOKAYL ETSGO,
The pirate grabs Dalton hops onto the shark and drags him outside.
Jules: Dalton!
Dalton: JUUUUUUUUULES!!!!!
Jules dashes over to the shark as it starts backing out of the classroom.
He gets outside and sees the shark is protruding out of a flying pirate ship.
Dalton (again): JUUUUUUUUULES!!!
Jules chases after the shark. The ship starts to rise higher. Jules leaps and grabs onto the shark as the ship gets higher.
Dalton: JUUUUUUUUUUULES!!!
Jules: Dalton!
Murray: Murray!!!
Wendle: WENDLE!!!!!
Jules climbs up the shark onto the ship.
Dalton: JUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUULES!!!!!!!!
Long pause.
Pirate: Hey Murray. Another one hitched a ride.
Murray: Hey check it out. I have ANOTHER hat.
Pirate: What should we do with him?
Murray: I think I liked my other hat better.
Pirate: I guess our assignment doesn't say anything about any other specimens. But I guess more can't hurt. Eh? Eh?
Murray: See look I look much better with the old hat on don't I.
Pirate: ENGAGE THE BIG TRANSDIMENSIONAL PORTAL OPENING THINGY! Wooooooosh!
The ship glows and stuff and the portal opens in the sky. The ship flies into it.
Shiny stuff woosh blah blah blah Dalton and Jules are screaming. Screen goes white. Fades to black. Pause.
Cuts to a shot of the sky with clouds. Big flash thingy. Dalton and Jules appear. They start falling.
Aaahhhblahblahblah.
TO BE CONTINUED
I dunno about the proper way to write a script so I sort of guessed.
A Big Blue Sky Episode 1
And thus went the great legend of times long forgotten.
Under a big blue sky, on top of a small blue hill inexplicably existing in the middle of a big big perfectly flat green field only not exactly the middle, just a little bit to the left, there sat Esoprup the hamster. Esoprup had spent the past seven million years smacking the ground with his face in order to carve a picture of a lizard into the face of the hill. It had been very hard work. The hill was rather hard. But at last, the job was done and Esoprup could finally relax.
He looked up at the sky. The sky seemed to smile a congratulatory smile at him. Esoprup smiled back. A truck fell out of the sky, landed on Esoprup and the hill, and exploded.
It wasn't a very good legend. Dalton certainly didn't think so.
<play cancion de mariachi for 1:00>
<shots of Dalton at school>
Dalton gets home <music fades>
Dalton slumps down in chair looking dazed. He stays there for ten seconds.
[TEN HOURS LATER]
Same shot but now it's 1:00 in the morning. Dalton jerks his head into alertness. Looks around confused a little. Reaches into backpack and pulls out a book. Opens it and places it on desk. Looks at it. Pause. Head clonks on book. Dalton is fast asleep.
[THE NEXT DAY]
[CLASS]
Dalton is sitting with his head on his desk.
Teacher: So according to the text, Dalton, what is the meaning OF (huge emphasis on this word) the legend of Esoprup?
Dalton doesn't react.
Teacher: Dalton? Dalton!
Dalton: Hemmemmgweghguhblegh.
Teacher: WRONG!
Teacher takes of his shoe. Shoe turns into gun.
Teacher: I SHALL NOW ADMINISTER YOUR PUNISHMENT!
Dalton looks up actually awake and frightened.
Before the teacher can shoot Dalton, a giant metal shark crashes through the windows and pins the teacher against the wall.
Teacher looks up. Eyes widen.
Teacher: Oh no. It can't be!
A pirate is standing on the shark. He looks around and then leaps into the air. He lands on Dalton's desk and it falls over.
The pirate squats down and stares at Dalton.
Jules stands up on the other side of the room.
Jules: Dalton? Are you okay? HEY IS THAT A PIRATE?!
Dalton: I...I dunnoobblbgghhhchhk.
Pirate: SWAALALALALALALALALA! MURRAY! It's him! Prepare the butter!
Voice outside: I am wearing a hat! HAHAHA! GET IT?!? A HAT?!?! AHAHAHAHAHA!
Pirate: THE BUTTER MURRAY! THE BUTTURRRRRRRRR!!!!
Voice outside: Oh yeah. *snort*
The shark's eyes glow and pipe comes out of its side. Butter shoots out and covers Dalton.
Dalton blinks.
Pirate: YERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR comminwithmeletsgo.
Dalton: Eh herm gwuh eh what?
Teacher: Hey! Hey wait! That's...uh...that's...uh no! What are you doing?!
Pirate: Doing?! DOING?! What are YOU doing?!?!
Dalton: Uh....buhhh....yeh?
Pirate turns around and leans his face in close to Dalton's.
Pirate: YERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR........ .......................COMMINWITHMELETSGOOKAYOKAYL ETSGO,
The pirate grabs Dalton hops onto the shark and drags him outside.
Jules: Dalton!
Dalton: JUUUUUUUUULES!!!!!
Jules dashes over to the shark as it starts backing out of the classroom.
He gets outside and sees the shark is protruding out of a flying pirate ship.
Dalton (again): JUUUUUUUUULES!!!
Jules chases after the shark. The ship starts to rise higher. Jules leaps and grabs onto the shark as the ship gets higher.
Dalton: JUUUUUUUUUUULES!!!
Jules: Dalton!
Murray: Murray!!!
Wendle: WENDLE!!!!!
Jules climbs up the shark onto the ship.
Dalton: JUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUULES!!!!!!!!
Long pause.
Pirate: Hey Murray. Another one hitched a ride.
Murray: Hey check it out. I have ANOTHER hat.
Pirate: What should we do with him?
Murray: I think I liked my other hat better.
Pirate: I guess our assignment doesn't say anything about any other specimens. But I guess more can't hurt. Eh? Eh?
Murray: See look I look much better with the old hat on don't I.
Pirate: ENGAGE THE BIG TRANSDIMENSIONAL PORTAL OPENING THINGY! Wooooooosh!
The ship glows and stuff and the portal opens in the sky. The ship flies into it.
Shiny stuff woosh blah blah blah Dalton and Jules are screaming. Screen goes white. Fades to black. Pause.
Cuts to a shot of the sky with clouds. Big flash thingy. Dalton and Jules appear. They start falling.
Aaahhhblahblahblah.
TO BE CONTINUED