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Old 04-11-2012, 03:31 PM   #1
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Hi guys,

I am using this as a place to dump the animations as I move through my learning path. I am working through the Tradigital book by Richard Lapidus. Any crits along the way would be welcome.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9aKhT...ature=youtu.be
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Old 04-11-2012, 03:51 PM   #2
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Hi I think this looks good. Only prblem I see is the first few frames where the pages seem to flipout a little too fast. Maybe add a frame or two in there to smooth out that pop.
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Old 04-11-2012, 06:26 PM   #3
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Hi I think this looks good. Only prblem I see is the first few frames where the pages seem to flipout a little too fast. Maybe add a frame or two in there to smooth out that pop.
I would like to know if a line of action was used. Checking out the placement through the arc might be helpful.
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Old 04-12-2012, 12:55 PM   #4
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Thanks for the positive replies guys. xtoon, I didn't use a line of action. Will have a look at the animation and work on changes.

I finished the third chapter and watching it now after upload, I can already see the end of the animation is not correct...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8n5uIxtPId4
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Old 04-13-2012, 01:51 PM   #5
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nice ball bounces, looks great going down the stairs, i'd say though once it's off the stairs I'd have it gradually have smaller bounces and eventually come into a stopping roll, also add some squash and stretch if possible.
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Old 04-16-2012, 02:01 PM   #6
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For the ball bounce, when its falling and then impacts the stairs, that Y curve should be Linear at the bottom because it feels like its slowing down on its way down when it should actually be getting faster as its falling.
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