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gndagnor · 10-21-2007, 05:00 AM

Wow, it's been a long time since I've drawn any real art. This is my latest. I would love to get some suggestions on what I should do to evolve my artstyle

It's great to be back here!

1uc · 10-21-2007, 07:05 AM

Hum...I think his left foot is slightly too long. It looks like clown shoe

but hey man I absolutely love those colours. Very nice...where have you been!!!??

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tallsmartman · 10-21-2007, 09:34 AM

Wow, I think that's really good. I especially like the clothing design and the hair. Nice job

-MW

Monsieur Rat · 10-21-2007, 02:58 PM

The biggest issue, is that I find the wight of the character isn't going anywhere. The anatomy is basically right, the design and snapper, and it's well coloured and rendered. The pose though leaves it feeling like he's more floating like that then standing. It doesn't like to me like gravity and doing anything to pull him to the ground.

Also, I don't like the way anime eyes look, lol. That's just my preference though.

gndagnor · 10-21-2007, 09:30 PM

Glad it's okay guys

I'm a bit rusty as I didn't practice for a few months

Aw cru I always seem to have problems with posing >_< I think I'll need to redraw his feet then? If anyone can do an overlay trace of my pic to show where the weight problem is, that'd be great

I also think I need to redo either the chain on the whip handle or the tail end of the whip. Their flow looks too similar :P

Ah, well back to the drawing board~

Glad for the help guys

1uc · 10-22-2007, 02:17 AM

I have no problem with weight...

but I can show you what I ment and if you want me to put this away say it!

10-21-2007, 07:05 AM	#2
1uc Luka Arh Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Novo mesto, Slovenia Posts: 474	Hum...I think his left foot is slightly too long. It looks like clown shoe but hey man I absolutely love those colours. Very nice...where have you been!!!?? post more __________________ Try hard and if you fail...next time try even harder! ---------------------------------------------------------- Link to my "gallery"

10-21-2007, 09:34 AM	#3
tallsmartman Matthew W. Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Plymouth, MN Posts: 128	Wow, I think that's really good. I especially like the clothing design and the hair. Nice job -MW __________________ Matthew A Weber \| Composer "Click on YouTube channel to listen to my music." Matthew's YouTube

10-21-2007, 02:58 PM	#4
Monsieur Rat Ryan Carell Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Canada, Eh? Posts: 1,281	The biggest issue, is that I find the wight of the character isn't going anywhere. The anatomy is basically right, the design and snapper, and it's well coloured and rendered. The pose though leaves it feeling like he's more floating like that then standing. It doesn't like to me like gravity and doing anything to pull him to the ground. Also, I don't like the way anime eyes look, lol. That's just my preference though. __________________ I blink naught but once, and it's gone. The world sheds a single tear and I am born. Yet, I fear that we have waited far to long, as a shadow is cast, and I miss it. -_ http://monsieurrat.deviantart.com/ _-

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10-21-2007, 09:30 PM	#5
gndagnor New Blood Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 12	Glad it's okay guys I'm a bit rusty as I didn't practice for a few months Aw cru I always seem to have problems with posing >_< I think I'll need to redraw his feet then? If anyone can do an overlay trace of my pic to show where the weight problem is, that'd be great I also think I need to redo either the chain on the whip handle or the tail end of the whip. Their flow looks too similar :P Ah, well back to the drawing board~ Glad for the help guys

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