commando. yes, another commando

dunbar10 · 04-13-2006, 01:12 PM

yes, it is another military type thing, sorry. I'll try and switch it up for my next peice.
the composition sucks, mainly because I never intended on finishing this.
but I did.
ah well.

NOOB! · 04-14-2006, 08:42 AM

looks great,colouring has improved too

right arm looks broken at the shoulder.

Terro · 04-14-2006, 08:51 AM

No need to switch from military type art, your awsome at it. Soldier looks great the only thing I think that can be fixed is the horizon line and the mountains. The cutoff line is to straight. The mountain range come into the water a little in a few places.

Great stuff.

dunbar10 · 04-14-2006, 02:09 PM

thanks guys.

NOOB: yeah, his shoulder is a little disjointed and elongated. (old football injury?

)

Terro: yeah, the entire background and water and stuff is all messed up. I basically just came up with it at the last second, this was just going to be wacom practice, so I didn't really plan any of that stuff out, and I'm afraid it shows.

04-13-2006, 01:12 PM	#1
dunbar10 Member Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Vancouver Posts: 57	commando. yes, another commando yes, it is another military type thing, sorry. I'll try and switch it up for my next peice. the composition sucks, mainly because I never intended on finishing this. but I did. ah well.

04-14-2006, 08:42 AM	#2
NOOB! Administrator Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: London/Bournemouth Posts: 2,000	looks great,colouring has improved too right arm looks broken at the shoulder. __________________ www.nmgmaterial.blogspot.com

04-14-2006, 08:51 AM	#3
Terro Greg K. Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Chicago, IL Posts: 5,324 Blog Entries: 7	No need to switch from military type art, your awsome at it. Soldier looks great the only thing I think that can be fixed is the horizon line and the mountains. The cutoff line is to straight. The mountain range come into the water a little in a few places. Great stuff. __________________ EightBitStrange TWITTER

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04-14-2006, 02:09 PM	#4
dunbar10 Member Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Vancouver Posts: 57	thanks guys. NOOB: yeah, his shoulder is a little disjointed and elongated. (old football injury? ) Terro: yeah, the entire background and water and stuff is all messed up. I basically just came up with it at the last second, this was just going to be wacom practice, so I didn't really plan any of that stuff out, and I'm afraid it shows.

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